写作训练(2005年1月27日) | |
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http://www.sina.com.cn 2005年02月07日00:05 合肥报业网-江淮晨报 | |
合肥晚报My best wishes for 2005 The New Year is coming. The spring is coming. All the thingsarenew. My life is new too. So I have a New Year`s resolution. Doyouwant to know it﹖ Let`s see together. FirstI`m going to do the things that I couldn`t completelastyear. A year agoI decided to set up a soccer team with myfriends.Most girls don`t like soccer. I want to spread this sportin ourfemale world. In factit was very hard. We could only find 9girlswho would like to join in. FortunatelyI had a new neighborlastweek. They are twin sisters.They want to join us. So I can makethesoccer team called″LOVE″this year. We are going to practice onceaweek. Second I want to make more friends. Yor know it is very nicetohave friends to talk to laugh and to play with. We can alsolearna lot from each other. I have many good friends. Xiaohui isone ofthem. She is very good at math while I`m good at English.Weoftenhelp one another. But that is not enough. The more friends Ihavethe happier I will be. Having many friends is fun. My another wish is about the world. I hope there will be nowarany more. People can travel freely all over the world.Ourcountrythe People`s Republic of China can integratepeacefully.We can make friends with the children from Taiwan. These are my best wishes for the new year. I look forward toahappy 2005. 师范附中 初一 张梦菲 李正宏老师点评:这是一个很有思想的女孩。一般的同学对新年进行展望时可能会想,我要怎样怎样学习,加强某某科目。但是本文的小作者却想组建一个女子足球队,并且看来不达目的誓不罢休。对世界和对国家的展望更是体现了作者渴望和平的愿望。语句通顺,用词准确,是一篇佳作。 (来源:合肥晚报) | |